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That day, a woman I hadn’t seen on my doorstep in five years came to visit—Tamara Nikitichna. In our Riverside neighborhood, people called her “the General’s Wife” behind her back.

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That day, a woman came to my door whom I hadnt seen in five years. Margaret Whitmore. In our little village of Riverford, people called her the Duchess behind her back. Not because of any noble blood, mind you, but for the way she carried herselfspine straight, chin high, as if she walked not on our muddy lanes but on palace marble. Her sharp gaze could cut deeper than any scalpel, and her pride could have fenced our entire village three times over. She never mingled much, just a stiff nod over her shoulderthat was the extent of her conversation.

And yet, there she stood on the threshold of my clinic. Not herself at all. Her back was still straight out of habit, but her eyes held a hunted weariness. Shed pulled her floral scarf low over her brow, as if trying to hide. Hesitating, unsure whether to step inside.

Come in, Margaret, I said gently. No sense letting the cold in. I can see youre not here for aspirin.

She entered, perched on the stool by the hearth, hands folded on her lap. Those hands had always been well-keptnow they were dry, cracked, fingers trembling ever so slightly. She stayed silent, and I didnt press. I poured her a cup of my mint and lime-blossom tea, set it before her.

Drink, I said. Warm your soul.

She took the cup, and her eyes glistenednot with tears, for pride held them back, but with that same still water youd find in a deep well.

Im all alone, Dr. Whitaker, she finally whispered, her voice frayed at the edges. I cant bear it. Twisted my wrist the other daynot broken, thank heavensbut it aches like the devil. Cant fetch wood, cant carry water. And my back hurts so much I cant breathe.

Her complaints spilled out like a bitter spring stream, murky with regret. As I listened, nodding, I didnt just see her present miseryI remembered how things were five years ago. Her house, the finest in the village, had once rung with laughter. Her only son, Edward, handsome and hardworking, had brought home a bride. Emily.

A quiet angel of a girl. Edward had met her in the city. Clear, trusting eyes, wheat-blonde hair in a thick braid, hands delicate but capable. Anyone could see why he loved her. But why Margaret despised herthat, no one understood.

Despise her she did, from the very first day. Nothing Emily did was right. She sat wrong, gazed wrong. Her stew wasnt red enough, her floors not clean enough. If she made jam”wasted sugar, spendthrift.” If she weeded the garden”pulled up the nettles for soup, useless girl.”

At first, Edward defended her. Then he wavered. A mamas boy, always under her wing, he fluttered between them like a leaf in the wind. And Emily she just grew thinner, paler. Once, I met her at the well, eyes brimming.

Why put up with it, love? I asked.

She gave me a sad smile. Where would I go, Dr. Whitaker? I love him. Maybe shell soften in time

She didnt. The final straw was an heirloom embroidered tablecloth, faded slightly in the wash. Oh, the screaming that followed

That night, Emily slipped away. Quiet as a shadow. Edward tore the village apart searching, then faced his mother, dry-eyed, hollow.

You did this, was all he said. You killed my happiness.

And he left. Rumor had it he found Emily in the city, married her, had a daughter. But no word, no visit to his mother. As if hed cut the thread himself.

At first, Margaret held her head high. Good riddance, shed tell the neighbors. A weak son who trades his mother for a skirt. But she aged overnight, withered. Her perfect house, sterile as an operating room, stood empty. And now, sitting before me, all her duchess-like pride had peeled away like old bark. Just a lonely, sick old woman remained. Boomerangs dont fly out of spitethey just circle back to where they started.

No one needs me, Dr. Whitaker, she whispered, a single tear escaping. Might as well hang myself.

Dont say such things, I scolded, though pity choked me. Lifes for living, not ending. Let me give you something for the pain. Well manage.

I gave her an injection, rubbed her back with liniment. She straightened a little, shoulders loosening.

Thank you, she murmured. Didnt think kindness would find me now.

She left, but my heart stayed heavy. I could treat her body, but some sicknesses have no pill or needle. Loneliness is one. And the only cure is another human soul.

For days, I agonized. Then I tracked down Edwards number through friends in town. My hands shook dialing. What would I say?

He picked up, his voice deeper, older.

Edward, its Dr. Whitaker. From Riverford. Am I disturbing you?

Silence. Then, Hello, Dr. Whitaker. Is something wrong?

Your mothers struggling, son. Failing. Too proud to show it, but shes ill, alone

Another pause. I heard Emilys voice in the background, gentle but firm: Let me.

Dr. Whitaker, she said, how bad is it?

I told her everything. The wrist, the back, the unshed tears. Emily listened without interruption.

Thank you for calling, she said finally. Well come. Saturday. But dont tell her. Let it be a surprise.

Such a heart, that girl. Chased out, scorned, yet not an ounce of spite leftjust pity. And pity, my dears, is stronger than any grudge.

Saturday dawned grey and damp. I checked on Margaret under the guise of taking her blood pressure. She sat by the window, staring. The house was spotless, but lifelesscold as a tomb.

Waiting for the grocers van? I teased.

Whod wait for me? she muttered. But her eyes kept flicking to the road. Every mother waits, even if she wont admit it.

I left, watching the clock. After noon, a car pulled upnot the van, but a sleek sedan. My heart leapt. Edward stepped out, broader now, a man grown. He opened the back door, and out came Emily, leading a little girl in a pink puffer jacket, fluffy as candyfloss.

Edward hesitated, jaw tight. Emily touched his arm, whispered something, and they walked to the gate. Its rusty creak sounded like time itself groaning awake.

I didnt witness what happened inside. But an hour later, smoke curled from the chimneythick, hearty. Someone had lit the hearth. By evening, golden light spilled from the windows, warm as a hug. I smiled through my tears.

Next morning, I dropped by to check her blood pressure. The house hummed with life. The scent of cabbage pies and something faintly childishcrayons, perhaps. Edward chopped wood outside, the axe ringing in the frosty air. Emily bustled in the kitchen, while by the fire, their daughter, little Rosie, played with a kitten.

And Margaret? Wrapped in a shawl, watchingnot glaring, but *seeing*. Her daughter-in-laws deft hands, her granddaughters earnest face, her sons strong back through the window. The mask had slipped, revealing just a tired, lined, but *living* face.

She saw me and smilednot with her lips, but her eyes.

Come in, Dr. Whitaker. Emilys baked.

Emily turned, beaming. Join us for tea.

And so we sat. No stiff pauses, no old grudges. Just warmth, the smell of fresh bread, and a childs giggle. Edward came in, sat beside his mother, and simply laid his big hand over hers. She didnt pull away. Just trembled, and stilled.

They stayed a week. The house revivedwood stacked, pantry sorted, repairs made. On their last day, Margaret stood on the porch, frail as a sparrow. Rosie hugged her knees.

Granny, will you visit us?

And thenMargaret broke. She knelt, clutching the girl, weeping softly as autumn rain. Forgive me silly old woman

Emily hugged them both. Well come again, Mum. Promise.

Words better than any medicine.

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