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Dont go in! Ring your dad right now! Someones waiting in there! Thats what this peculiar old lady hissed at me as I started up the porch steps, my little girl in my arms.

CHAPTER 1: THE OLD LADY

You know that damp, woodsmoke-laced smell you get on an autumn night in England? The sort of air that usually settles the nerves and feels like home? Well, it was one of those evenings in York. Late October, icy enough to seep through my wool coat as I fumbled for my new set of keys on our terrace.

Wed only moved up a month ago. The place was a cracking old Victorianbay windows, big wraparound veranda, and chestnut trees creaking overhead. It shouldve been a fairy tale. Starting over, Tom kept saying, New job, new place, new beginnings, Lucy. He still had that roguish wink from when we first met.

But that night, the shadows cast by those chestnuts went on forever, spilling onto the steps like fingers.

I hitched Pippa up a bit higher. Shes four, so asleep she felt twice as heavy. Her little curls tickled my chin.

Nearly home, pumpkin, I mumbled, more for me than her.

Found the right key. Was about to slot it in.

Thats when she grabbed my wrist.

Not rough, but urgent. I gasped, heart thudding, almost dropping everything as I spun around.

Standing below me on the step was an old woman, small, bundled in a moth-eaten tartan coat, cheeks lined but eyes piercing blue.

She leaned right in. Smelt of Murray mints and damp tweed.

Dont go in, she whispered, voice trembling but slicing through the night. Ring your father.

I stared, properly rattled. Sorrywhat?

Call him now, she said, grip going vice-tight. Before you unlock that door.

I tried to free myself gently. I think youre confused. My dads passedeight years now.

She wouldnt let go. If anything, her stare got even fiercer. Not madness or confusion, but the look of someone who knows something no one else does.

No mistake, she said. Youre Lucy, just moved in. Toms always away for consulting work, isnt he? Youre on your own more often than you realise.

She glanced at the front door, then up to the dark upstairs window.

Tonight, she said, swallowing, dont open that door.

A chill twisted through me.

Who are you? I managed.

Just do it, she hissed. Even if it feels pointless. Call. And listen.

She finally released me and melted into the shadows next to the veranda post, trying to disappear.

I stood there, frozen. Logic said just ignore her, get inside, and maybe call the police about this bonkers lady. Tom would laugh hearing about it when he got back from the airport.

But I looked at the door.

Nothing out of the ordinary. Fresh navy paint. The shiny new Yale smart lock Tomd put in last week. The autumn wreath I made.

But something was off.

It was too quiet. I shouldve heard the fridge humming, or the old radiators clanking. Tonight, the house seemed to be holding its breath.

I looked at my phone, finger hovering over the contacts. Scrolled past Tom, past Mum, then there it was.

DAD.

Id never deleted it. Couldnt bring myself. Just a digital headstone.

This is mad, I muttered.

But the old ladys eyes burned into me.

I pressed call.

CHAPTER 2: VOICE FROM THE PAST

It rang once.

That odd, tense brrr-ing.

Rang twice.

Expected to get This number is no longer recognised. Or some strangers voicemail greeting.

Thenclick. Dead line.

Silence.

I held my breath. Hello?

Lucy?

It was rough, gravelly, but the voiceI knew. My hands shook. My knees nearly buckled underneath me.

Dad? I whispered, barely audible.

An exhale from the other end.

Dont step through that door, he said evenly. Tom isnt home, and theres a man watching you from the other side right now through the spyhole.

My world spun out of focus.

I hugged Pippa tight. She whimpered in her sleep.

Dad? I croaked, shaking hard. Youre youre dead. I was at the funeral.

You buried an empty coffin, love. Im sorry. God, Im so sorry. But listen now: you have to get away. Straight away.

Go where? I was rooted to the spot, panic pinning me.

Theres a white Vauxhall parked down the road. Hazards off. Engine running.

I made myself look away from the door and across the street. Sure enough, under a streetlamps glow, a plain white Vauxhall Astra idled quietly.

Yes, I muttered.

Good. Head for it. Dont run. Dont look back at your door. Take nothingnot a nappy bag, not a teddy. Nothing.

But Tom

Thats not Tom behind your door, he cut in, firm. Toms still at Heathrow. His flight in from Manchester was late. He wont be home for a while.

My stomach bottomed out. How could you know that?

Ive been keeping tabs, Lucy. Toms deep in something nasty. So deep he dragged you in too. Now, listen. Walk, calmly. Dont let the bloke behind that door know you suspect anything.

The doorknob behind me clicked.

In the dead quiet it sounded like a rifle shot.

Hes opening it, Dad said quietly. Walk. Now.

The old woman stepped outno look at me. She faced the door, standing as a tiny human shield.

Go, love, she urged quietly.

I made myself walk down the steps. Every bit of me screamed to run, but Dads voice kept me steady on the line.

Keep steady. Dont let him see you know.

From behind, I heard the front door creak open and a slow footstep.

Lucy? A man called. It wasnt Tom. The voice was lower, smooth.

I didnt look back.

Keep going, Dad urged. Dont answer.

By the time I reached the pavement, the Vauxhalls back door swung open.

A woman sat up frontshort hair, tough as old boots, hi-vis police vest over her top. She nodded.

Get in, she said, voice cool but kind.

I scrambled in, Pippa clinging to me, then slammed the door and locked it.

The car peeled off, tyres slick in the wet.

Out the back window, I saw hima tall, unknown man stood on my veranda under the light, watching as we sped away, pulling a phone from his pocket.

Were clear, said the driver into her headset.

Dad? I whispered, clutching my phone. Are you there?

Im here, sweetheart, Dad said, his voice almost breaking. Im right here.

CHAPTER 3: THE SAFE HOUSE

The drive was nothing but drizzling rain and blurred streetlights. In no time we were out beyond the city, into wild, foggy countryside.

I pelted Dad with questions.

Why, Dad? You vanished. Mum died thinking you were gone forever. I mourned you.

I know, he replied wearily. Every day hurt, Lucy. But I was an investigator for HM Revenue & Customs. Found something I shouldntmoney laundering, big crime syndicate stuff. They put a hit on me. And you. I had to disappear.

And Tom? I asked, dreading the answer. What about Tom?

Toms no straightforward consultant. He cleans money for people who need it out of sight. He got mixed up with the exact lot I was onto. They want payment. He led them to you.

No, I whispered. Hes not like that. He loves us.

Toms lost, Lucy. Desperate people do desperate things. He gave them our house code. Maybe he thought theyd just rough him up, not that youd be home.

Fear gave way to cold betrayalTom, who made toast soldiers for Pippa, who read her The Gruffalo.

We pulled in to an old cottage tucked away in the woodslooked rustic till you noticed the reinforced doors and high-tech kit everywhere.

Inside, at a steel table, sat a man.

He stood. Greyer, older, worn down. But those eyes were my Dads.

I sobbed as he hugged mewarm, solid, smelling of old jumpers and engine oilso real I couldnt believe it.

Pippa stirred, blinking at him. Grandad? she mumbled, confused.

Dad knelt down to her, tears spilling. Hello, Pippa. Its really me.

CHAPTER 4: QUESTIONS & ANSWERS

Next morning was a flurrypolice everywhere, the driver (Detective Allen) and her team transformed the sitting room.

Weve got Tom, picked him up at Kings Cross. Hes in holding, Allen told me with a mug of tea.

I want to see him, I said.

Soon, Dad said softly. But see this first.

They played me house camera footage.

10 oclock. An hour before I got home.

Video showed a big black Audi pull up. Two men climbed outthe same stranger on my porch, plus a squat fellow with a sports bag.

No need to force entrythey knew the code.

My birthday.

In they went.

Tom handed over the code, Allen said gently. Weve got his messages.

She gave me her tablet.

Tom: Door code is 0713. Shes not home til late. Make it look like a burglary. Leave the insurance docs on the table.

Other: Were not here for the paperwork, Tom. Were here for leverage.

I felt bile rising. Dashed up and was sick.

Leverage. Me. Pippa.

Tom hadnt just been carelesshe sold us out.

When I came back, Dads jaw was clenched tight.

Says he thought it was just the safe. Claims he didnt know theyd hurt you. Hes lying, Lucy. Or hes lost all grip on reality.

I need to look him in the eye, I insisted.

CHAPTER 5: FACING TOM

They took me to York police HQ. Left Pippa with Dad, safe. Safe as only a Dad who sacrificed everything could manage.

Tom slumped at a cheap table, hands cuffed, suit creased. He looked up, desperate.

Lucy! Youre all right! Tell themIm the victim!

I sat, dead quiet. Just stared.

Lucy, please those menthey threatened everything. I just did what they askedI thought I could fix it after! Get us out!

You gave them the code, I said quietly.

Theyd have ruined me. Theyd have killed me.

But you let them in to get to us instead?

No! Id never! I thought I could sort it.

You didnt know me at all, Tom, I said, voice hollow.

I stood up.

Lucy, dont! Were married! Please!

Not any more, I replied. You swapped your family for your own skin. You lost both.

I left, never looked back.

CHAPTER 6: WHAT CAME AFTER

The next months: interviews, court, witness protection, the lot.

Tom crackedgave up his contacts, the criminal web, all of it. Went down for fifteen years. Wrote from prison. I never opened his lettersburned the lot.

Dad was officially alive again. Complicated, but his evidence brought down their operation. He didnt get the old life back, but he got us.

We moved. Again.

This time, a quiet little village on the edge of the Dales. Dad moved nearby.

Pippa adored himlearned to fish, carve, and check every window lock twice.

One evening, sitting on our new porch with tea, sun falling over the fields, Dad asked softly, Do you forgive me?

For leaving? I asked back.

For lying.

I recalled that old ladythe one who saved my neck.

Who was she? I asked.

He smiledsad, a bit proud. Mrs. Higgins. My old handler, back from my undercover days. Long retired. But when I heard you were in danger, I asked her to keep watch. Lives here still. She agreed without a blink.

She saved us, I said.

He nodded, squeezing my hand.

I forgive you, I whispered. You did what you had to. Thats what parents do.

He squeezed my hand tighter. Im here for good this time, Lucy. Swear it.

EPILOGUE: MAKING PEACE

Five years gone.

Pippas nine. Doesnt remember the porch, just a nice lady in a white car who gave her a Ribena.

I remember all of it.

Every night, I triple check the doors. Security systems like something MI5 would envy. Trust takes time.

But Im happy.

Teach art at Pippas school. Dad comes for tea every Sunday. We build new memories, one slow day at a time.

Sometimes, when the wind stirs the old trees at night, I think of Mrs. Higgins, and her grip on my wristthat fierce will to protect.

Never saw her again. But sometimes, I say a quiet thank you into the dark.

And if ever you find yourself on a doorstep on a stormy English night, child in your arms, heart in your mouthif a stranger warns you not to go in?

Listen.

Because the monsters are realbut so are the people who stand between you and them.

THE END.

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